Some people think that children should begin their formal education at a very early age. Some think they should begin at at least 7 years old. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is true that Children should get a formal education as early as possible, while others argue it is reasonable to let children study when they have at least 7 years old. I believe an early commencement of study would be far more beneficial than a later start.
First of all, children attending schools at an earlier age generates many positive outcomes. It is easier to gain knowledge and experience when you are young because your brain at these ages is still developing, thus the younger can learn very quickly. For example, In VietNam all households must let their kids go to primary school when they get to 6, this decline the illiteracy which causes a major threat to society. Moreover, teachers can help children discover their potential skills and develop these skills by teaching them. As a result, these children will become more mature and integrate more easily into the educational environment in the upcoming years. For instance, Primary schools will provide high-quality education equipment so teachers can learn some basic skills which equip them with vital soft skills including teamwork and communication skills.
On the other hand, children who are under 7 will easily get distracted by other things because they still like playing with friends rather than studying. Therefore, parents should give them an environment that they can contact the outside world and play with friends instead of going to schools to start learning progress.
In conclusion, although, protecting children in their homes is good but this declines the opportunities that they can explore and experience outside the house. Therefore, I believe that parents send their children to school when they start the first talk as soon as possible is the right decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 314, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to progress'
Suggestion: to progress
...d of going to schools to start learning progress. In conclusion, although, protecting c...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, moreover, so, still, therefore, thus, while, at least, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, first of all, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1471.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14335664336 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60762517096 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.597902097902 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.2476312653 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.583333333 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.75 7.06120827912 195% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211171436216 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0772061575752 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711096415623 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.128242129091 0.151304729494 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0624516332127 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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