Some people think that children should start school at a very early age, but others believe that they should not go to school until they are older, Discuss both views and give your opinion.
It is true that parents are responsible for sending their children to school at the right age. While some people suppose that children should be kept at home until they are old enough, I personally believe that children are definitely able to gain more if they start formal school at a very young age.
There are several reasons why individuals might argue that children should stay at home instead of going to school until they are older. Firstly, if obliged to go to school when they are psychologically unready, children are likely to develop the fear of learning. For example, formal education is associated with regulations and homework, which creates excessive and unnecessary stress for little kids. Secondly, children are encouraged to learn and discover things around them through playing rather tedious hours in the classroom. Parents could purchase some educative toys for their children such as Lego which would help them in learning words, shape and colours.
However, I support the view that children should be allowed to register at nursery classes at the early stage. The main benefit of this trend is that acquisition ability is greater at a younger age than at an older age. In other words, the younger the children are, the more easily they acquire the knowledge and adapt to the schooling environment. As a result, teachers may have no difficulty in educating them in terms of manners. In addition, due to the tight schedules, some working parents may struggle to look after their babies, so they resort to send their children to kindergartens. Not only do they focus on their work but their children are also taken care of carefully.
In conclusion, early formal education, certainly has its drawbacks, but I believe that the benefits outweigh them in the long term.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as a result, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1495.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01677852349 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60418468006 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.593959731544 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.9874973947 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.785714286 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0714285714 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.402099362985 0.244688304435 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131178898348 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116424401973 0.0667982634062 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.235458377083 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.128860644357 0.056905535591 226% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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