Some people think that children under 18 years old must receive full-time education. To what extent do you agree/disagree?
In today’s society, it is believed by many individuals that students before their age of majority should be given full-time teaching. Although there may be some reasons why people advocate this notion, I am of the opinion that schools shouldn’t apply this way of education to pupils.
There is no denying that full-time education has some beneficial impacts on students. First and foremost, schools can help children to spend more time studying. In fact, there are several means of entertainment nowadays which may act as a distraction to youngsters. As a result, they have an inclination to waste their time by using their mobile phones or computers all day. Another advantage worth mentioning is that full-time teaching refrain students from taking part in social vices. Pupils are too young to be aware of some would-be problems in the community. By this way, they don’t have time for bad habits from the outside because of teachers’ supervision.
However, there is a plethora of detrimental repercussions of this teaching method. To begin with, there may be a lack of soft skills in children who have to spend all day studying at school. Since they do not have enough time to take part in social activities, they do not have any opportunities to gain their experiences in life, which makes their life after graduation may become harsher. Not only that, a hectic schedule in school could lead to depression and stress in students. By this way of education, children may be overwhelmed due to an enormous amount of knowledge and the shortage of leisure time, which could drain all of their enthusiasm and motivation for study.
In conclusion, although full-time education has some advantages in teenagers’ lives, I strongly believe that a balance of study-life time could go a long way.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 180, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'several means'.
Suggestion: several means
... more time studying. In fact, there are several means of entertainment nowadays which may act...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, may, so, thus, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05369127517 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84013968067 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 461.7 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.1262344498 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157838208183 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0570835083427 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0504126667944 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11345415381 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0316154341789 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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