Some people think that companies should provide employees with exercise time during the day.
Health promotion is the responsibility of the company, as some believe that the organisation should create time for employees to take part in fitness trainings during the day. This essay will highlight importance of engaging employees in routine exercises at workplace, as well as the drawbacks.
Exercise promote overall wellbeing of a person, therefore encouraging workers to partake in fitness programs reduces days of absenteeism at workplaces. People tend to live sedentary lifestyles, especially those who work in offices. They usually drive to and from work and might find it difficult to create time for exercises at home. Conditions related to sedentary lifestyle, such as, varicose veins or heart disease affect those who do white-collar jobs mostly, therefore creating time for employees to exercise is of importance.
In addition, team work is the main aim of most organisations. Engaging employees in tasks, such as, team building help strengthen the relationship among workers. It also helps to understand the employee and their counterparts each other's weakness. This understanding will aid in covering the gap of those with weakness in a certain area. For example, an insurance company, there are people who have good communication skills with clients though they are actuaries and those good at both numbers , as well as, those who are good at calculating risks only. It helps to place the person at the right task, despite, having all the qualifications.
However, exercises are beneficial to the workers, though they are time-consuming. People need to change into training attire before they start training. Post exercises a shower is inevitable, therefore, bathrooms and showers should be provided by the organisation. Time will be consumed especially by women as some need about one hour to apply makeover which could have been spoiled through sweating during exercises. If exercises are done at workplace will mean targets for the day will not be attained and the day goes into a waste.
In conclusion, exercises are important for the company to achieve productivity, as workers will be fit. Fitness trainings can be done on alternate days, so that it can mot consume the time for company's set targets.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: promotes
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'others'' or 'other's'?
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
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...actuaries and those good at both numbers , as well as, those who are good at calcu...
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
...uaries and those good at both numbers , as well as, those who are good at calculating risk...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1896.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 354.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35593220339 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97958936552 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584745762712 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.1669285281 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.7894736842 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6315789474 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57894736842 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299724159024 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805471298143 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554370605196 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163701382703 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0717317944876 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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