some people think that criminals should be given longer terms in prison, so as to reduce the crime rate. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It is agured that punishing the criminals by putting them in prisons could help to reduce the incidence of crime. In my opinion, however, along with imprisonment for a long term, education and rehabilitation might hold a certain position in order to improve the situation.
In the one hand, longer imprisonment policy would act as a detterent to tackle the problem of crimes increase. Firsly, this measure could raise the fear of committing crimes. If people who are tempted into a life of crimes might be aware of the severe consequences, they would not want to offend it. Secondly, it is likely to be the best solution to uphold an ordered society. The henious offenders such as murders or rapists should serve a long prison sentence or even a life sentence. Hence, it would be ensured that citizens are living in a safe and secured environment.
In the other hand, the significance of education and rehabilitation should not be neglected. First, due to the fact that the issue of crimes results from poverty, unemployment and illiteracy, the wide range of education courses are needed to eliminate the problem from the root. Therefore, citizens should be fully-educated and when a better live comes, they do not have any tendency to commit crimes. Second, first-time or petty offenders should be given a chance of rehabilitation. There are a number of identifying programs and strategies including community service projects or voluntary events that would help criminals successfully reintegrate back into society without re-offending.
In conclusion, while long term imprisonment could lessen the crime rate in some ways, there are a variety of certain methods that would aid even better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15217391304 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.97441480921 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597826086957 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 459.0 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.4023135325 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.571428571 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7142857143 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221479749867 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0687369946808 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0436515845409 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123694416889 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00587463923011 0.056905535591 10% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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