Some people think that dangerous sport should be banned while others believe that people should be free to choose.Discuss both views and give your opinion
In recent years, many people have been concerned about the consequence of dangerous sports that can cause players trouble. Although extreme sports might have some negative impacts on their health, I still believe they should leave people with proper rules and regulations.
On the one hand, various reasons explain why governments should ban regulations on risky sports majors. The first reason is that taking part in adverse sports brings a high risk of injuries and pain that they have to go through after participating in unique adventure games. The player suffers from long-lasting medication and pays a high price for a brief rush. For instance, if you break your bone, you can find it challenging to move and do heavy jobs, and even your physical and mental health may degrade and weaken. Furthermore, there are various adverse conditions that you cannot predict, such as bad weather or sudden currents in water diving water sports which bring worse conditions of shortness of breath, increased heart rate, and much more in the above cases.
While I support regulations and safety measures, I believe that it would be wrong and impossible to ban extreme sports. Firstly, all sports contain and have their dangers, so it is inconclusive to provide strict rules on sports. For example, although they are safe games, like jumping rope or volleyball, you can get injured if you use the wrong technique. In addition, people have to sign up for lessons with a registered club before participating in sports. Beginners are not allowed to drive solo and are accompanied by an experienced professional.
In conclusion, I would argue that people should be free to enjoy extreme sports as long as they understand the risks and take the appropriate precautions.
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Suggestion: moving
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, still, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1470.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 289.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08650519031 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70700160039 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.629757785467 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.094849226 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.076923077 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.2307692308 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07692307692 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219782502934 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734066056557 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741290727567 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151351264802 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0658706316461 0.056905535591 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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