Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the statement. Give the reason and relevant examples.
Sports event are played all over the world and popular in almost every country. Many people enjoy watching it while many like to participate in it. Sports are mainly associated with health and enjoyment, but there are many sports which are dangerous. Many people believe that such sports should be banned while others disagree to it. In my opinion, we should carefully go through both positive and negative points and then decide on it.
Human life is very precious, and dangerous sports can be a threat to the person that performs it. For example, sport like Formula car racing, where the drivers drive the car at a very high speed and there are high changes of accident. In many instances car goes and hits the stand, hurting not only the driver, but also many people sitting in the stands. Many people die in such accidents and many others get serious injuries. In such cases, it is a huge loss to person’s families who die in such accidents and many have to live rest of their life with the permanent disability.
On the other hand, People who love challenging sport say that such sport give them adrenaline rush. They like to challenge themselves and show it to the world that they are outstanding than normal humans. Furthermore, many dangerous sports are national sports in many countries. For instance, Kickboxing is national sport of Thailand and many participant get serious injuries performing it. Banning such sports can hurt sentiments of those countrymen. So, it is very important to carefully go through merits and demerits of such dangerous before taking any decision.
In conclusion, every sport has little or more danger in performing it. It is up to the individual carefully go through all the pros and cons before deciding to participate in such games.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'instances'' or 'instance's'?
Suggestion: instances'; instance's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9238410596 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55435408524 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526490066225 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 460.8 506.74238477 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 24.933553673 49.4020404114 50% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 82.6111111111 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7777777778 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.61111111111 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.152567283934 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0594324012182 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0512754404991 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100905552263 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0389254535897 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.96 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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