Chasing thrill is human nature. This is why many people like extreme sports. Sometimes horrible accidents happen such as people died; thus, there are suggestions to forbid these sports. In my opinion, you can ban any sport, but you cannot ban the heart of chasing excitement.
The reason why they should be forbidden is simply, it is a threat to individual safety. There are a huge number of reports about what happened when dangerous sports fail. For example, few years ago, a team of a climbing club in China lost connection when they tried to overcome the world’s second highest mountain. It is not only about losses of twenty lives, it is also a huge tragedy for their families. The risks of extreme sports are often out of control; therefore, the government may need to get involve in them.
However, this topic also relates to a basic human right, which is that people have the freedom to choose what they want to do as long as they do not threaten others’ interests. I believe most dangerous sport plays fully understand the possible consequences of their own sports and voluntarily play what they want to play. If danger is the only reason to ban these thrilling activities, then driving cars should be forbidden as people dead as car accidents are much more than people dead by playing extreme sports.
In conclusion, playing dangerous sports such as climbing mountains does have explicit and terrible risks. However, from the perspective of human freedom, we should not and cannot ban them; otherwise, the governments can take more rights from the general public.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 247, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...vernments can take more rights from the general public.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'but', 'however', 'if', 'may', 'second', 'so', 'then', 'therefore', 'thus', 'for example', 'in conclusion', 'such as', 'in my opinion']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.198675496689 0.247107183377 80% => OK
Verbs: 0.188741721854 0.155533422707 121% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0993377483444 0.0946595960268 105% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0794701986755 0.0501214627716 159% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0562913907285 0.0437548338989 129% => OK
Prepositions: 0.0960264900662 0.122226691241 79% => OK
Participles: 0.0364238410596 0.0403226058552 90% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.51186480585 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0298013245033 0.0326793684256 91% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => More particles wanted.
Determiners: 0.0728476821192 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0264900662252 0.021408717616 124% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0264900662252 0.011925033212 222% => Maybe 'Which' is overused. If other WH_determiners like 'Who, What, Whom, Whose...' are used too in sentences, then there are no issues.
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1618.0 1933.35771543 84% => OK
No of words: 268.0 316.048096192 85% => OK
Chars per words: 6.03731343284 6.12580529183 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.365671641791 0.374742101984 98% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.25 0.28420135186 88% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.164179104478 0.203846283523 81% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.108208955224 0.137316102897 79% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51186480585 2.80594681477 90% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.037074148 90% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59328358209 0.56093040696 106% => OK
Word variations: 62.6278116559 60.7387585426 103% => OK
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0891783567 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.1428571429 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.0884071057 49.517814964 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.571428571 127.492653851 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7743622355 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0 0.814263465372 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 3.99599198397 25% => OK
Readability: 44.1428571429 49.1944974215 90% => OK
Elegance: 1.02040816327 1.69124875643 60% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282037942038 0.332605444948 85% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.0597609729539 0.102741220458 58% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0421592600377 0.0668466124924 63% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.492404680913 0.534860350844 92% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.109679483945 0.148594505496 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101482972614 0.134430193775 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560458257353 0.0742795772207 75% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.227567091209 0.324371583561 70% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.0349276880852 0.0638462369009 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.182270429405 0.228012699653 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497956946528 0.058150111329 86% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.68436873747 58% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 5.0 5.90881763527 85% => OK
Negative topic words: 6.0 2.5751503006 233% => OK
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 11.0 10.4468937876 105% => OK
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9