Some people think that developed countries have higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
It is argued by some people that preservation of Environment is the prime duty of developed nations while the others believe that it is impossible without support of every country. However, I am also agree that it should be individuals responsibility but developed countries must take initiative and assist economically to developing countries for that.
on the one hand, the major environmental issues such as global warming and Ozone layer depletion can affect the whole world. In other words, it is being said that developed nations are more answerable for those serious problems because most of the part of earth is utilized by them. For instance, The US, China and India they are the highest manufacturer industrial items as well as user of fuel in automobile sector. Hence, they are the major problem creator and it is their fundamental duty to allot funds for conservation of globe.
On the other hand, The threats such as air and water pollution in any region is individuals liability of that provenance because only they can evaluate the causes behind those in their territory and can find the best solutions. In addition, countries can also produce electricity through renewable energy sources of their region to control the pollution caused by the thermal power plants. lastly, problems like traffic congestion and solid waste handling which are also emerging as dangerous problems to atmosphere of locality which can only be resolved by the local authorities.
In conclusion, I believe that with the support of organizations such as the United nations and developed countries, all the nations should commit to save environment and world.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, lastly, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1396.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22846441948 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8372955752 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.569288389513 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 31.4826936586 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.6 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.167287452944 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0647015587852 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0753076728668 0.0667982634062 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117746258284 0.151304729494 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0982450308978 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.6 13.0946893788 127% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 16.0 9.78957915832 163% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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