Some people think that developed countries have higher responsibility to combat climate change than developing countries. Others believe that all countries should have the same responsibilities towards protecting the environment. Discuss both these views ad give your own opinion.
Climate change is one of the most problematic issues countries are facing. While it is thought that developed nations have to take on more responsibilities than developing countries, all countries are strongly believed to join in finding solutions to this problem. I will discuss both views.
On the one hand, living environment where we live together must be responsible for by each country. In fact, one of those countries investing in industrialization is careless in tackling problems about drainage and polluted air during development process, which seriously affects to worldwide environment relating to global warming. As each country's actions are able to have overwhelming influence others' environment, everyone must be responsible for this.
On the other hand, developed countries should be more responsible for global warming than developing countries. First and foremost, it is irrefutable fact that developed countries have spent a period of long time comprehensively advancing every aspect including education, economy ,etc earlier than others. During this process, it is likely to partly have negative impact on environment, thus, after full development, they ought to find urgent solutions to climate changes rather than other countries. Secondly, after advancing their technology, they have enough conditions to face this problem. It is clear that developing countries don't have enough fund and technology to cope with environment problems compared to developed countries, thus, developed nations spend more time and money reducing climate changes.
In conclusion, personally, although both developed and developing countries must be responsible for climate change, I strongly believe that nations having modern technology and science should invest more in it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, second, secondly, so, thus, while, in conclusion, in fact, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1527.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.82824427481 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.05312975572 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.576335877863 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.2124836426 49.4020404114 130% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.25 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8333333333 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.91666666667 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.441953736734 0.244688304435 181% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175531432783 0.084324248473 208% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101353469095 0.0667982634062 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.301871660878 0.151304729494 200% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0846084570581 0.056905535591 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.24 50.2224549098 66% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.53 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.02 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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