Some people think that education should help students to be useful to the whole society, while other people think that education should provide students with opportunities to archieve personal ambitious. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
It is commonly believed that education nowadays usually orientate students to be useful for the publicity, while other against that education should help students to archieve their personal dreams. I am, however, convinced that education mainly support individual purpose rather than the whole society.
On the one hand, it is undeniable that literacy will definitely assist students to get a job whether it is paid or not. In this regards, they will not be burdens of the society, due to the fact they will gather enough money to pay for the anually tax. Furthermore, the graduators will have the obligation to pay back the subsidied by government, particular, those who study in literacy instituition will be in charge of assigned tasks to promote the society development as a whole.
On the other hand, if education focus on pupils personal archivements, they would have freedom of choices in choosing their expected jobs, and will be clear from social responsibility. More precisely, students will have no bond with the government or any subsidy. Therefore, the student will be pro-active in learning and deciding their future on their own.
In conclusion, it can be said that it is crucial for the government to make a wise decisions on whether to help the students to study higher educations and when they graduated they will comeback and indicate their knowledges to the society, or, let them to pursue their dreams and decide their future on their own .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1230.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 242.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0826446281 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94415379849 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78960141759 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.582644628099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.7177869796 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.666666667 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8888888889 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.88888888889 7.06120827912 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.224088076463 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10387076763 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0941372083971 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159645548873 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11196720587 0.056905535591 197% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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