Some people think that the effective way to reduce pollution is to tax the companies which cause it. Others think that there are better ways to achieve this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Lifestyle has Undergone dramatic changes over a couple of decades.presently,in many nations folk are suffering from health hazards due to high consumption of spicy food.hence,it vital for authority to impose higher tax on that kind of food.Here,I would discord with given statement.
There are manifold points to shore up my point of view .first and foremost, junk food satisfy the taste of youngsters.youngsters are passionate as they are fond of eating Spicy food.Hence authority impose tax on these kind of food it will dissatisfy the masses.beside it, to impose tax on junk food it will also effect on small food outlet.To elaborate, these kind of shops outlet is already less so if administration impose higher tax on food their sale will plunge and shops will be shout down automatically. Further more, their are some food industries which produce food world wide with large quantity and large number of employees work there,hence authority impose tax on this the number of folk will be unemployment.However, it also save peeps quality time.To illustrate, nowadays masses have hectic lifestyle they do not have enough time to prepare food at home.but junk food has take less time to prepare which save peeps quality of time.
There are many benefits of this to inflict tax on spicy food.Initially, consume to much spicy food folks are suffering from many health hazards such as obesity, sugar,blood pressure, dubieties etcetera. Hence to preserve masses from health regarding hazards.authority should inflict tax on spicy food. Moreover,due to modern-era youngsters give their first preference to junk food instead of eating their traditional food. Hence impose of high tax will hinder to satisfy their taste.
To recapitulate,food is vital for everyone to live the life junk food and traditional food both have their own importance but junk food is first choice of adolescent.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, kind of, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28903654485 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21040267827 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531561461794 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 152.827312677 49.4020404114 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 199.0 106.682146367 187% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.625 20.7667163134 181% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.875 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 27.0 5.01903807615 538% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0666338371638 0.244688304435 27% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.035052565688 0.084324248473 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.00973165909757 0.0667982634062 15% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0433766972742 0.151304729494 29% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0127589539744 0.056905535591 22% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.99 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 29.5 9.78957915832 301% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 30.0 10.7795591182 278% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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