It is often argued that dress code in the work place is not a priority for the employers, while the most important is the quality of job the employees can do. This essay will discuss why I completely disagree about neglecting the dress code on the job.
The main reason why other employers is not interesting regarding the dress code of their employees it is because they think that the people will just see the product of their work and not the employees outfit. For example, the nurses working in the hospital once they wear their uniform they look professional and the people will respect them. The job of a nurse is tough and the dedicated worked they gave to thier patients really suits the way they dress.
However, some company does not want their employees to be dress code, maybe they think the employees can handle the workload eventhough they are not in uniform. For instance, the construction workers other company provided their people a uniform while others allowed to wear only civilian attire. Otherwise, the employers mind think that the job is messy and can cause dirt in their uniform and difficult to removed once stained by the paint.
To conclude, I completely disagree about the employers neglecting the dress attire of the employees. It should be properly uniform and look respectful in the eyes of the people but, the most important thing is the quality and the dedication of their work.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 268, Rule ID: ALLOW_TO[2]
Message: Did you mean 'wearing'? Or maybe you should add a pronoun? In active voice, 'allow' + 'to' takes an object, usually a pronoun.
Suggestion: wearing
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, may, really, regarding, so, while, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 41.998997996 52% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1178.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 244.0 315.596192385 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82786885246 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44115094825 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 176.041082164 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.487704918033 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 347.4 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.1216437936 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.8 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.4 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324660192453 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.136640315203 0.084324248473 162% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616860460972 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.203929947284 0.151304729494 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373234636005 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 50.2224549098 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.03 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 45.0 78.4519038076 57% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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