Some people think that environmental problems should be solved on a global scale while others believe it is better to deal with them nationally.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
people have different views on how environment">environmental issues must be dealt with. While some claim that these problems need globalized solutions, other people believe that each country should face them independently. And there might be some merit in both views. Yet, in what follows it will be shown that people ought to solve environment">environmental problems universally.
In my opinion, I consider that having a collective approach to issues concerned with the environment is the best way to tackle them. Firstly, this way studies may be able to include various human and financial resources. Thus, this will lead to a quick success, since researches will have ample materials in their hands. Secondly, this is a huge opportunity for scientists to share their experience with others around the world. For instance, issues like global warming might only be overcome, if scientists work as a group to find a global solution.
On the other hand, other people maintain that every nation could effectively solve environment">environmental problems on its own. They argue, that it is impossible to find a global solution that will apply the environment in the whole world. there might always be exceptions and variations that will not fit to a single international concept. Another reason behind this belief is that each country has its inherent environment, and the local authorities have a better understanding of its problems. Therefore, the nation should be in charge of dealing with issues of its environment.
In conclusion, having considered a range of arguments from both sides it was demonstrated that the world needs to find generalized solutions for environment">environmental issues. However, a section of society thinks that these problems ought to be solved on a national scale.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 16.0 7.85571142285 204% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1579.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59929078014 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.32552749608 2.80592935109 154% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.585106382979 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.7873181277 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6875 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.8125 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338110556839 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108147167466 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0761447742593 0.0667982634062 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.205986990321 0.151304729494 136% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0898334696663 0.056905535591 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.9 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.57 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.