Some people think that everyone has the right to have access to university education,
and that government should make it free for all students no matter what financial
background they have. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, many people rely on online education because it is more comfortable you can learn in your own place avoiding spend much time in transportation and crowded roads especially in countries like Egypt which suffers from traffic problems.
also online education rely on the most using gadgets that we like to use like computers and mobiles which people prefer than books and paper that they feel it is boring some how
For example one of the most interesting apps called Cambly it is an app you can use to learn English online in your place and one of the best advantages of this app that you can determine the time that suits you the most . Moreover, you can also choose your teacher
But like everything in our life's online education has disadvantages online education sometimes is more expensive than face to face education for example having a teacher for a quartereveryday may costs you 1200 Egyptian pound
However, when we mentioned one of the advantages of online education that we used mobiles and computer it is also a disadvantage because we already spend a lot of time on it
In addition to, online education doesn't give you the chance to interact with people in real life away of technology
also depending only on technology is not a wise idea because computer and mobiles cannot replace books and using your own hand to write and learn
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Also
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1152.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 235.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.90212765957 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60538784448 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514893617021 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 378.9 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 3.0 16.0721442886 19% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 78.0 20.2975951904 384% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 200.181584235 49.4020404114 405% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 384.0 106.682146367 360% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 78.3333333333 20.7667163134 377% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 22.3333333333 7.06120827912 316% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0835614195524 0.244688304435 34% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585737079786 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.020156283468 0.0667982634062 30% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0417022507065 0.151304729494 28% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295200974414 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.8 13.0946893788 312% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -7.69 50.2224549098 -15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 33.7 11.3001002004 298% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.32 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 29.0 9.78957915832 296% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 33.2 10.1190380762 328% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 34.0 10.7795591182 315% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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