Some people think foreign visitors should be charged more than local people when they visit the cultural and historical attraction in a country. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
it is commonly said that today in the world tourism has brought many changes among the people's life. it helps to local people in various ways. so I firmly disagree with the given statement that foreign tourists should be charged more than local people, when they visit to other nation. In following paragraphs, I shall discuss a number of arguments.
To begin with, why tourists should be charged more than local people. there are several reasons, which are contributing in this phenomenon. First prime cause is that visitors are the backbone of every economy in the whole world because it provide...
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...rism has brought many changes among the peoples life. it helps to local people in vario...
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... helps to local people in various ways. so I firmly disagree with the given statem...
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... I shall discuss a number of arguments. To begin with, why tourists should be ch...
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...ould be charged more than local people. there are several reasons, which are contribu...
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...nd other opportunities to local people. so if the local people do double charge fr...
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...and cultural or traditional background. so when they visit in india, they easily a...
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...currency is very high compare to india. However, why tourists should not be char...
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...to historical places. Moreover, it also effect upon the communication because when the...
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...ce to learn new language from visitors. so if the local people take the equally ch...
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...arged from tourists and local visitors. Moving further, to other big reason is t...
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... and tradition also would be fall down. To sum up, I pen down concluding, touris...
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...o visit cultural and historical places. so both have equal rights to visit any whe...
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...ces. so both have equal rights to visit any where.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, for example, such as, as a result, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42854006426 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.505747126437 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1315945217 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.6666666667 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.77777777778 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.374507658894 0.244688304435 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121317918412 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0917569052857 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.223042311742 0.151304729494 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481236683718 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.