Many people have different views as to when children should start formal education. While some argue that children should learn as soon as possible, others contend that 7 seems to be the optimal age for formal schooling. Personally, I agree with the latter.
On the one hand, there are reasonable arguments for commencing formal learning at a young age. Firstly, this helps to shorten the learning jouney of learners, leaving them more time to be better prepared for their future. If learning time were to be contracted, students would have more time in their hands to add more things to their skill set, be it computer skills or interpersonal capabilities. Moreover, it has been proved that the brain at their early years of development has the advantage of absorbing knowledge and learning new things faster than when it grow older. Therefore, the fact that a number of Vietnamese parents are eager to send their offspring to private pre-school classes can be seen as a way of taking such an advantage.
However, I believe that all formal schooling programmes should not be implemented until children reach the age of 7. From the ethical perspective, all children have the right to enjoy a childhood which is free from any pressures including financial burdens and school-related issues. In other words, their early years in life should only center around family and leisure activities as they have almost a lifetime ahead to be stressed and worried about. On top of that, early schooling has been proved ineffective due to the intricate nature of knowledge that has to be imparted to children. As a result, informal forms of teaching through music and paintings seem to be the right way to go.
In conclusion, despite the advantages in terms of time and learning speed that early schooling brings to children, I believe that formal classes should start at the age of 7.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'grows'?
Suggestion: grows
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, as to, in conclusion, as a result, in other words, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1560.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93670886076 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7024723558 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.572784810127 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3481978977 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.428571429 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5714285714 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227204956719 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0898259522242 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0969792846379 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.18293578937 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108096675102 0.056905535591 190% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.1 13.0946893788 100% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.38 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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