Some people think that good health is important to everyone, so medical services should not be run by profitmaking
companies. Do the advantages of private health care outweigh the disadvantages?
Many people believe that private companies should not be allowed to provide medical services because of their focus
on profit maximisation while care should be the ultimate goal of any health provider. This essay argues that the pros of
private healthcare outweigh its cons.
The disadvantages of private healthcare are hard to ignore. Firstly, when the service is provided for a profit, private
healthcare packages may include hidden charges for unnecessary items. Secondly, operating as a business, a
private practice is often located in populous urban areas other than isolated districts where access to health services
is limited in most cases. In this regard, the private sector does little to improve the well-being of people in need.
However, the above-mentioned drawbacks are dwarfed by benefits of private healthcare. Non-public players broaden
choices and increase competition. As a result, prices tend to go down and quality is likely to go up; in the end, it is the
people that enjoy the windfall. Moreover, the participation of private providers helps release pressure on the public
healthcare system when they join the government in building health infrastructure. As an immediate effect, taxpayers’
money is saved for other causes that boost the economy, benefitting all.
In conclusion, although there exists some opposition to private health services, I believe they bring far more
benefits than drawbacks. The pulic sector cannot be a lone player in healthcare provision because the population is
growing relentlessly and everybody needs healthcare. The important word to note here is ‘EVERYBODY.’
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, as a result, in most cases
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1407.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.628 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13843018084 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.64 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 440.1 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.8598130064 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.5 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8571428571 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.28571428571 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259757883971 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0758248675254 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0691064890383 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779889190286 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0616407203502 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.72 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.