some people think that government should band dangerous sports, while other think that every people have freedom to different sports and activities. Discuss and give your own opinion.

Essay topics: some people think that government should band dangerous sports, while other think that every people have freedom to different sports and activities. Discuss and give your own opinion.

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with the steady growth in modernisation, The life style of people have been greatly affected. they have achieved various milestones; However, some issues remain unchallenged and as complex as ever . one such issue here is of Whether authorities should ban dangerous sports or not? Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic through examples, assertions and shape up my opinion by the end.

To commence with , there are numerous of people who believe that government should ban dangerous sports such as ridding cycle on hills because these types of sports telecast on television and that sports are watching by the children after that they are trying dangerous sports at their home . Due to this , some time it had accident just behind the reason authorities should ban dangerous sports. The best epitome is that the survey conducted by " Hindustan Time"(newspaper) people are doing dangerous sports at their home and some time they lose their life .

On the flip side, the group of people who believe that people should have freedom to do any activity or sports. There are two main reason for this. The first and foremost reason that comes to my mind is that people should pay any activity as they are more healthy. Moreover, if people are playing different sports as they can participate in sports competition as well as they show there talent in front of others owing to this sports are quite good for earn the name and fame .So that's why, government should not ban sports because every people have freedom to do any sports .

In conclusion , As we have seen number of answers for this question still ,I believe that people should not play the dangerous sports, but I also think that should implement some rules and regulations for the dangerous activities but should not be banned.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, so, still, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1511.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93790849673 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5542566534 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.52614379085 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.1932443853 49.4020404114 172% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.916666667 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.66666666667 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.361537669668 0.244688304435 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125973935088 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.083163286003 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.217593504452 0.151304729494 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0564731407148 0.056905535591 99% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 78.4519038076 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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