Some people think that the government should increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles to solve environmental problem. Give your option.
Nowadays, have many people believed that the authorities should support the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles transport to solve environment problem. This essay will examine both sides of the argument before conclusion is drawn.
Admittedly, there are some arguments in favor of people think that government increasing the cost of fuel. First, petrol is the part important for moving traffic among transportation area regardless of kind of transport and also the problem government. If national authorities raised taxes on petrol, this would address two environmental issue. This increasing petrol support, presumably, tends not only to increase the overall of gasoline rate of people life but also to motorists would limit the number and length of their journey to compensate for the extra expense. Second, increase the cost of fuel would probably result in a public transport provision, as people would still need to travel or to work, school and shop or hospitals. Moreover, this cost would support for lower-income people or building school for less privileged yet gifted student. In fact, skilled and environmental human capital is imperative to foster economic growth and technological in any nations.
Nevertheless, the resultant problem would be far more significant than the minor benefits once government increase petrol for vehicles. First, increase petrol for all people would likely correspond with a tremendous financial strain on human. Nowadays, in this modern life, have many technology devices and also have many transport. Almost, everyone have their own vehicles for travel, work or go to school, having their own means of transportation is very convenient because when people using the public transport system will sometimes waste their time and will have to waiting a long time for the car to pick up, meaning that, the increase in petrol is putting pressure on them. Second, increase the petrol would tempt many disadvantages including pursuing up the price of goods in circulation or putting pressure on in flatiron, thereby adding great burdens for people and their economic and potentially wasting time that these people could have spent pursuing more suitable transportation paths. It, instead, would be a more financial viable option if the resources were focused on supporting deforestation for environmental.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 317, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun transport seems to be countable; consider using: 'many transports'.
Suggestion: many transports
...e many technology devices and also have many transport. Almost, everyone have their own vehicl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, so, still, in fact, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1983.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.43287671233 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83762618211 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.564383561644 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 78.020054402 49.4020404114 158% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.2 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.4 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304498835598 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113509248545 0.084324248473 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110258783055 0.0667982634062 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.232175409803 0.151304729494 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0573150743504 0.056905535591 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.3 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.51 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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