Some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extend, do you agree or disagree?
People have different views about which subject students should be taught for the country’s development. While it is true that teaching science can promote the progress of the nation, I believe that others subjects is also advantage for a country to develop.
On the one hand, there are several reasons why teaching science subject at school would be beneficial for the development of a country. Firstly, the advert of modern scince could lead to new inventions, which help people to produce higher yield. For example, the introduced of electric and computer assist citizens to complete work simply. Automatic machine can do the job carried out by human the day before, which enable us create greater productivity and cut production costs. Secondly, science subjects help learners to sharpen their logical thinking and solved problem skills. These skills are likely to boost their imagination and creativity. Such capabilities are paramount importance for people to gain competitive edge over other contries.
On the other hand, it is wrong to reject the argument infavour of benefit of other subjects. They are also play important roles in the country’s progress. Students who are taught winder knowledge and pratical skill will become well- rounded individuals. These human resources are key factors which contribute to the development of a nation. Take some subjects for example, Art could improve creative thinking skill of people. In globalization trend, international trade is more prevalent, so people need to be equiped with foreign language such as English or Chinese.
In conclusion, although it might seem to sensible for the government to invest more budget on teaching science, I personally believe that the authority should concern about different subjects.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'advantaged'.
Suggestion: advantaged
... I believe that others subjects is also advantage for a country to develop. On the one ...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'played'.
Suggestion: played
...enefit of other subjects. They are also play important roles in the country’s progre...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1504.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42960288809 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77073401605 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638989169675 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.9511356974 49.4020404114 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3125 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.317345257713 0.244688304435 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870650087639 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0693630531077 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.193786622704 0.151304729494 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0568046847084 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.92 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.