some people think that government should invest more money in teaching science than other subjects in order for a country to develop and progress. To what extant do you agree or disagree.
It is often believed by few individuals that teaching science in schools more important than others subjects and regimes ought to spend more money on it. I am totally agree with the given notion and this essay will highlight that why it is appropriate trend because of reasons such as make new technology and new inventions in the area of medicines.
To begin with, even though there are myriad of reasons but the most prime is breakthrough of new gadgets and products. To explicate it, in this era the country having new technological weapons or gagdets are considered as fully developed country and earn huge amount of money by selling to armies of other nations. Because authorities of every part of the world give priority to their defense system, modern weapons are being required by them. If the government would put money on scientific study in the educational institutions and provide scholerships to students who are studying science, this will encourage students toward science stream resulting more scientist will create in a nation. For instance, China is well developed country because of more intelligent scientists who are working on every sector discoveries. Thus, administration should give more funding for teaching science.
Another reason is research in the medicines and find treatment of disease which is very propitious for the survival of human race. To elucidate it, health sector is a very big industry and every year bring a new pernicious disease and for the treatment of this, continuous researches are very important with different brains, so that country can become the superior in the world by finding exact molecule for that illness and can engulf big profit from it. Also, the development of every nation is totally depend on the situation of health department and their treatment. But officials also teach other subjects like math, history which are beneficial for human according to their taste.
To conclude, although other subjects are necessary for the learners, authorities should spend money on teaching science in schools and colleges to give better knowledge to the students by hiring knowledgeable teachers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for instance, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 347.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22766570605 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31600926901 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75830597919 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.559077809798 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 558.9 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.2430898762 49.4020404114 136% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.538461538 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6923076923 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.15384615385 7.06120827912 73% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240094278008 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0868257580631 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0703872952578 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150587152775 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0344863880841 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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