In this contemporary era demand of health and education has been increasing significantly. Therefore, the society is bifurcated into two perceptions, where one section of society profoundly espouses that government ought to spend money on health care and education sector. While others expess that it is onus of individuals. In following paragraphs i will illustrate both viewpoints with my opinion.
On the one hand, it is indispensable that citizens pay taxes on every thing which they buy, due to this contribution government has been earning lots of fund. Hence, many people opine that health care and education sector are responsibility of government. In addition, poor individuals can not afford bills of big hospitals, therefore government should spend money on those people for wealthy health. For example, nowadays prices of medicine are increasing rapidly, owing to this, poor people are unable to afford expensive bills.
On the other hand, many individuals opine that health and education sector is a personal matter, therefore if government will pay huge amount on citizen's expenses, then it will be unfair for employed people, because unemployed citizens get all facilities without paying any cost, whereas, employed people are paying tax. To illustrate, government has already started several schemes for poor people from taxes paid by employed people.
In conclusion, it is clear that government responsibilities are more prominent than individual's personal matter, because poor people can not afford expensive bills.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, then, therefore, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1309.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59401709402 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96710789687 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 405.9 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.1004778063 49.4020404114 140% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.0 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2727272727 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0909090909 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.290132103198 0.244688304435 119% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105971228148 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05405645417 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171562277976 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0481776598764 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 78.4519038076 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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