Some people think that the government should provide assistance to all kinds of artists including painters, musicians, and poets, etc. However, other people think that is a waste of money. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some of the groups believe that local authorities should help all professions regarding to artists consist of painters, musicians, and poets, while other people think that it would be a waste fund of governments. This essay will elaborate both views and give my favour to this as well as put forward some relevant examples. On the one hand, as a policy makers should accommodate for artist to let them getting better future in path career, in addition, it would allow them to express their creativity to the public as well as attracting schoolchildren not only that but also young generations in general to appreciate their work or idea. The existence of poets for instance that some inhabitants in recent day might be able to enjoy all kind of literature in the pastime due tho the fact their contribution. Another equally important is that the government should give motivating and supporting artist's work improvement, this such a part aid should be applied by governments over the world. On the other hand, some of society groups assume that accommodate the artists with providing some facilities to sharpen their ability would trigger drawback effects. One of them is that many countries in the world which could not help them financially due to the fact that governance's fund might more allocate to major sector development such health institution, education and economic sector, since artist's work are unlikely to give a significant impact to the nation compared to other sectors. By way of conclusion, allocating assistance for artists could give benefit effects for its countries by providing some facilities where they could train their skill for getting better future. I strongly recommend that the government should control their aids to artists since they could give their creativity internationally.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
Some of the groups believe that local authorities s...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, well, while, for instance, in addition, in general, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1520.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 293.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18771331058 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13729897018 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82158656499 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566552901024 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 466.2 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 70.4999781105 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 168.888888889 106.682146367 158% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.5555555556 20.7667163134 157% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3333333333 7.06120827912 189% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26150279781 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109770028017 0.084324248473 130% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0795995550261 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26150279781 0.151304729494 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.3 13.0946893788 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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