In contemporary society, people have different feelings about art. Due to this, some are considered that spending money on the art is waste of it, and government should use this money to other facilities. I completely disagree with this view and it is not a total waste of money.
Art is the one of the most important part of the culture of a country. According to this, government should spend convenient amount of money for it. Because, we have to inherit our cultural elements to the new generation that are missing the knowledge about art. It means government could repair and preserve the objects of the art. For example, maintaining the old monuments, sculptures and museums that can explain their ancient time histories and through that information they acquire loads of awareness.
Furthermore, knowing about art is one of the ability that people must have. This wisdom could give people more opportunity to communicate and exchange their cultures to the other counties’ people and it could be the bridge that connect two foreigners. In addition, the art is enriching our value of the culture and shows us importance of our religion and so on.
In conclusion, Nowadays most of the counties are developing rapidly, through this development, some people are distracting too much with sophisticated technology. Consequently, some of them think that spending money to maintaining the art is purposeless movement of government and that money should invest other side of the country. In my opinion, people should stay focused on their stems first of all.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...pend convenient amount of money for it. Because, we have to inherit our cultural elemen...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... importance of our religion and so on. In conclusion, Nowadays most of the coun...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, if, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 256.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14453125 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89053789987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.54296875 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3797305248 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0714285714 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2857142857 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.85714285714 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.365812147126 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126570377212 0.084324248473 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.107430688549 0.0667982634062 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238230763653 0.151304729494 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.11167336379 0.056905535591 196% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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