Some people think that governments should ban dangerous sports, while others think people should have freedom to do any sports or activity. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent years, the loss and damage associated with a host of dangerous sports are engendering a widespread concern to society. Therefore, some people reckon that the state should promulgate policies prohibiting these kinds of sports, while others believe that people should have the right to choose any sports or activity. From my perspective, I lean towards the latter idea.
On the one hand, when it comes to extreme sports, even as individuals are well-prepared and fully equipped with proper protective devices, the precariousness is still there. That means even the most minuscule mistakes can exert catastrophic or even lethal effects. For instance, between 2000 and 2011, experts estimate that over four million injuries were triggered by extreme sports. Therefore, it sounds logical that a ban on all dangerous physical activities is desirable.
Notwithstanding the aforementioned justification, prohibiting these kinds of sports would do both athletes and society a great disservice. First, several people have an innate talent for risky sports, and forbidding these activities would preclude them from achieving their full potential. In addition, these sports also generate a lucrative income for a myriad of athletes who reign supreme in this domain. As a result, this source of revenue can fall into a substantial decline if the law banning this field is enforced. Last but not least, with the advent of technological advancements as well as strict regulations, procedures, and safety measures, the hazard of dangerous sports, unquestionably, can be hindered. Therefore, players can derive great pleasure from these sports, enhance their productivity, and give a boost to the national economy.
In conclusion, while the prohibition on adventure sports is rational to some extent, I opine that the government should give precedence over the right of each individual to engage in their sports of choice.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, so, still, therefore, well, while, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48986486486 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03781972859 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9345134942 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.071428571 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1428571429 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 7.06120827912 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.249593162426 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734650782971 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0934243720449 0.0667982634062 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162898185968 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0981060206931 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.56 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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