The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries

Essay topics:

The chart and table below give information about healthcare resources and life expectancy in different countries.

The chart depicts data on the number of hospital cots for every thousand people in eight different countries, while the table illustrates information about the state allocation for health and average life expectancy in Japan, Netherlands, and the US.
Overall, Japan has the most substantial amount of hospital bed facilities whereas the US has the least. In addition, the US diverts the most from the national budget to healthcare amenities and the opposite is true for Japan.
As can be seen from the chart, the number of hospital cots per thousand citizens in Japan, which is the most considerable, is almost twice as high as that in Germany, with 14 and 8, respectively. Additionally, this figure in the rest of the nations reveals a negligible discrepancy (around from 4 to 5), and the lowest amount is witnessed in the US (only roughly 3).
According to the table, the US has the highest amount of public money spent on healthcare resources at over $6700, followed by Netherlands at $3481 and Japan at $2581. By contrast, the population of Japan has the longest life expectancy at 83 years, followed by Netherlands with a tad more modest figure at 80 years, and the US is the shortest at 78 years.

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Average: 7.3 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 992.0 965.302439024 103% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7922705314 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82024665948 2.65546596893 106% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565217391304 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 300.6 283.868780488 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 45.2467159706 43.030603864 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.714285714 112.824112599 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144733434974 0.215688989381 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603241418356 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747359747532 0.0843802449381 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.088872899998 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0863917482694 0.0819641961636 105% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.2329268293 120% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 61.2550243902 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.3012195122 130% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.06136585366 106% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.4329268293 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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