Some people think that highest salary is important when choosing a company to work for . while others think that could atmosphere at workplace is more important .discuss both view and give your opinion.

Grammar and spelling errors:
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...ramatic changes over a couple of decades .presently , A chunk of masses assert tha...
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...nges over a couple of decades .presently , A chunk of masses assert that choosing ...
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Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'company the highest'.
Suggestion: company the highest
...sses assert that choosing a work of any company highest salary is important while other say tha...
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...first and foremost, all company provide a highest salary . because workers fulfil...
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Line 3, column 107, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...st, all company provide a highest salary . because workers fulfil their desires su...
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Line 3, column 110, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Because
... all company provide a highest salary . because workers fulfil their desires such as, l...
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Line 3, column 249, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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..., they can all fulfill desires. Moreover , the highest salary is important every p...
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Line 3, column 338, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whereas” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...Because they can earn bread and butter. Whereas, those people job in those company. The...
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Line 3, column 367, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'those companies'?
Suggestion: this company; those companies
...nd butter. Whereas, those people job in those company. They can give us low salary. They do n...
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Line 3, column 447, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ry. They do not fulfil desires. Nowadays , time of expensive . people not buy a ex...
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Line 3, column 467, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...il desires. Nowadays , time of expensive . people not buy a expensive products . ...
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Line 3, column 470, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: People
...desires. Nowadays , time of expensive . people not buy a expensive products . On th...
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...ys , time of expensive . people not buy a expensive products . On the other ha...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'product'?
Suggestion: product
... expensive . people not buy a expensive products . On the other hand , there are conf...
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...ve . people not buy a expensive products . On the other hand , there are confli...
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Line 5, column 18, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...xpensive products . On the other hand , there are conflicting view, every perso...
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Line 5, column 81, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...g view, every person get in this company . those company provide a low income. To ...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Those
...iew, every person get in this company . those company provide a low income. To demons...
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Line 5, column 84, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'those companies'?
Suggestion: this company; those companies
...iew, every person get in this company . those company provide a low income. To demonstrate, t...
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Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...trate, they can feel healthy environment , comfortable and complete there work ver...
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Line 5, column 224, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...and complete there work very reflexively . they can spend their maximum time in hi...
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Line 5, column 227, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: They
... complete there work very reflexively . they can spend their maximum time in his com...
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Line 5, column 329, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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Suggestion: .
...help each other in any situation of work . beside it, the company provides low inc...
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Line 5, column 332, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Beside
...p each other in any situation of work . beside it, the company provides low income . w...
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Line 5, column 374, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...side it, the company provides low income . we have to work low hours And that time...
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...e it, the company provides low income . we have to work low hours And that time to...
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Line 5, column 438, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...ours And that time to care on his health . those company provide highest salary. W...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: Those
...s And that time to care on his health . those company provide highest salary. We have...
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Line 5, column 441, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this company' or 'those companies'?
Suggestion: this company; those companies
...s And that time to care on his health . those company provide highest salary. We have to work...
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Line 5, column 455, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'provide the highest'.
Suggestion: provide the highest
...e to care on his health . those company provide highest salary. We have to work 24 hours . it c...
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Line 5, column 503, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...highest salary. We have to work 24 hours . it cause of health disease and they can...
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Line 5, column 506, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
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Suggestion: It
...hest salary. We have to work 24 hours . it cause of health disease and they can no...
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Line 5, column 509, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'causes'?
Suggestion: causes
...t salary. We have to work 24 hours . it cause of health disease and they can not enjo...
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Line 7, column 59, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
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...th side aspects have their own important .highest salary provide us luxury life st...
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Line 7, column 60, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: '. the highest'.
Suggestion: . the highest
...h side aspects have their own important .highest salary provide us luxury life style whe...
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...uirements before thinking about whether a choose a job with a lot of money or peaceful a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, moreover, so, then, whereas, while, such as, on the other hand

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1455.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08741258741 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55120668617 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559440559441 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 467.1 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 54.4831359073 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2608695652 106.682146367 59% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4347826087 20.7667163134 60% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 3.69565217391 7.06120827912 52% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 36.0 5.01903807615 717% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246599797776 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.061920803489 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0657357764701 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.137440647126 0.151304729494 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0642754507932 0.056905535591 113% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.8 13.0946893788 67% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 50.2224549098 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.35 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.82 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.