Many people argue that the behavior of the top sports person inside or outside the field can be unlawful, as they are representing our nation in fields. This essay completely disagrees with this statement as it reflects inequality in the society and spread wrong impression on the young generation who are following them as role model.
The renowned professionals sometimes behave unethical in the society which is not acceptable as it reflects inequality among the people. Every human being have same rights and duties towards the country hence for every wrong activity strict action should be taken by authorities against the person irrespective of their social status. For instance, many famous cricketers were banned to play internationally due to the match fixing crime by the Indian Cricket Corporation even though the board faced lot of heat from their followers.
In addition to this, top sports persons are followed by the young generation of the society as the role model. The social media websites spread the controversies and our new upcoming talents consider these activities as standard and start imitating the same in their games. For example, In the football world cup 2018, many players were abusing each other, which was clearly visible and due to which the followers of both team in the stadium also started fighting due to which the whole match was cancelled.
In conclusion, in every country all should be treated equally rather than giving preference to top professionals to behave unethical as it leads to social difference and influence the upcoming stars to be like their senior players.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ople argue that the behavior of the top sports person inside or outside the field can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1356.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17557251908 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68049823728 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.599236641221 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 418.5 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.3430621992 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 150.666666667 106.682146367 141% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1111111111 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.22222222222 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102181412915 0.244688304435 42% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.04230110406 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.038175390294 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0646354322164 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0558018491321 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.36 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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