Many people argue that the behavior of the top sports person inside or outside the field can be unlawful, as they are representing our nation in fields. This essay completely disagrees with this statement as it reflects inequality in the society and spread wrong impression on the young generation who are following them as role model.
The renowned professionals sometimes behave unethical in the society which is not acceptable as it reflects inequality among the people. Every human being have same rights and duties towards the country hence for every wrong deed strict action should be taken by authorities against the person irrespective of their social status. For instance, many famous cricketers were banned to play internationally due to the match fixing crime by the Indian Cricket Corporation Board even though the board faced lot of heat from their followers.
In addition to this, top sports persons are followed by the young generation of the society as the role model. The social media websites spread the controversies and our new upcoming talents consider these activities as standard and start imitating the same. For example, In the football world cup 2018, many players were abusing each other, which was clearly visible and due to which the followers of both team in the stadium started fighting.
To conclude, in every country all should be treated equally rather than giving preference to top professionals to behave unethical as it leads to social difference and influence the upcoming stars to be like their senior players. The youths are highly influenced with the stars hence their behavior and activities directly impact young minds.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 48, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...ople argue that the behavior of the top sports person inside or outside the field can ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1406.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24626865672 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65413676536 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597014925373 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 37.7597669484 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.6 106.682146367 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.108076057873 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0413741072923 0.084324248473 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0361032721118 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.068216091013 0.151304729494 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0530516351236 0.056905535591 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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