With the subsequent growth of population around the globe, the demand of building homes are increasing day by day even though the spaces available are only in the outskirts of the city. It is argued that we should save the countryside by reducing the construction in those areas which is justified as it helps to save the nature and reduce the carbon emission in those green beds areas.
Firstly, the construction of house and apartments outside the city area by cutting down the trees leads to deforestation. It is very important to save the greenery around the city as it helps in reducing the pollution generated from vehicles in the city. As illustrated by a European journal, the air quality of the European country Austria is very clear due to the maintained green beds all around the country.
Secondly, the outskirts of the city are considered the relaxation places on weekends as when people are stressed out from their daily working routine. Most of the people enjoy their family time in the outskirts by either doing day activities or playing with their kids in the open places as kids can inhale the natural clean air. Building houses in these areas will have huge impact on the livelihood of the local people. In Indian villages people spent most of their time in the green fields to be close to nature.
The construction of housing for the growing population should not affect the green beds close to the cities. Reducing the forests or countryside affects the environment as well as the day to day leisure activity of the people.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...o day leisure activity of the people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 32.9175257732 39% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 26.3917525773 174% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1291.0 937.175257732 138% => OK
No of words: 267.0 206.0 130% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83520599251 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58381367089 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.513108614232 0.622605031667 82% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 399.6 290.88556701 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 5.0 0.824742268041 606% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 35.6824840702 44.8134815571 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.363636364 76.5299724578 153% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 16.8248392259 144% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.90909090909 4.34317383033 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.114603537392 0.216113520407 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404540567775 0.0766984524023 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0388898355092 0.0603063233224 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658548048096 0.12726935374 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420087596296 0.0580467560999 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 8.37731958763 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 70.7449484536 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 7.45979381443 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 8.71597938144 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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