Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally.
People have different views about whether it is better for a nation to purchase foreign blockbuster movies or to make domestic ones. While people believe that buying the overseas programs and movies has several benefits, I would argue that producing traditional programs is a better alternative.
On the one hand, there are some enormous benefits from importing foreign films and programs. Firstly, a nation procures movies produced overseas, it would help people access to the civilized cultures. This results in people getting more useful information and knowledge. Secondly, citizens may learn the good things of other more well-bred communities and change their behaviors. For example, people who are from Vietnam can learn the habit of queuing in Western countries while they are waiting to buy food and drink in super market.
On the other hand, I believe that producing the traditional channels and movies locally is one of the best ways to develop the national economy and retain conventional values. The first reason is that film industry is likely to create plenty of work jobs such as actors, actress, directors and so on as well as invest the huge amount of money in the national budget. This leads to the fall of the unemployment rate in the future. The second reason is that programs made by local people would enable to preserve the local customs, belief, ethics and traditional values of their own cultures. For instance, many Vietnamese TV programs broadcast Cheo, Tuong, Cai Luong on Saturday night, which reminds youngsters of the diversity of traditional music and the beauty of them. This demonstrates that the traditional values will be neglected if the youth watch foreign movies.
In conclusion, while external programs and movies have an advantageous effect on people’s lives, it seems to me that creating domestic films is an optimal choice.
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 303.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19801980198 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17215713816 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66939376289 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590759075908 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.1716169323 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.6428571429 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219299140103 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0683263326762 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0451152696521 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.131632890971 0.151304729494 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548482135095 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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