Some people think that it is good for a country's culture to import foreign movies and TV programmes. Others think that it is better to produce these locally. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People have distinct perspectives about whether a country should purchase foreign movies and TV programmes or produce ones for its own. While the production of local movies and TV shows could bring several advantages, I would argue that it is better to import movies and TV programmes.
On the one hand, local movies and TV programmes benefit national culture in two important ways. First, by usually depicting traditions and customs, local movies could help to preserve traditional culture. Which is exemplified by many Vietnamese films which remind young generations of how people celebrate Lunar New Year, which is the most important festival in Vietnamese culture. Second, the local products would promote the national pride and patriotism of people by showing national beauties. For example, inhabitants will be proud of the beautiful landscapes or magnificent sceneries of their nation on television.
On the other hand, there are several reasons why a country should import movies and TV programmes. One reason is that while enjoying these foreign media, people could simultaneously learn and understand more about the world and its various cultures, then they could follow good things from more civilized countries and alter the way they behave. For instance, many Vietnamese people these days have stopped eating dog meat as western people do. Additionally, this understanding of other cultures becomes increasingly crucial in the current trend of globalization when many people have the chance to work or study abroad, which helps them be able to blend easier into the international community.
In conclusion, although local films and TV shows could be beneficial to some extent, I would argue that foreign ones contribute more to the culture of a nation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, mind you, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38489208633 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80065252624 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.8169856321 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.75 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1666666667 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251220690243 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988483290667 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.065651652454 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161786242488 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0693797567756 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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