Some people think that it is important to use Leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing Word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during Leisure time.
Leisure time is a good time for refreshing our mind. Doing interesting things in leisure time also increase knowledge. Nevertheless, there some issues which remains irrevocable and as complex as ever. For instance, the given topic asserts that free time is a good time to enhance our knowledge with the help of some mind games like Word puzzles. Through this essay, I shall explore the dimensions of this topic and shape up my opinion by the end.
On one side, there is a group of people who believe that reading knowledgeable books or magazines improve the mind. With the help of books one can easily increase his IQ level. Puzzle games also help to sharp one's mind.
Controry to this, there is an opposing group of believe that free time is for rest not for playing or reading. These type of people prefer to rest in leisure time because they think that one can get tired after their work and this is only time in which a person feel relax. They thought that in compensatory time a person is free from stress and rest their mind. Sleeping is a complete rest according to those people.
Nevertheless, weighing both the options, I believe that there is no single conclusion still I take this ground that on effective clap require both use of hands.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, nevertheless, so, still, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1036.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 222.0 315.596192385 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.66666666667 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.8600083453 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40559097708 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 176.041082164 71% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563063063063 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 321.3 506.74238477 63% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.6850023092 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.6923076923 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0769230769 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.30769230769 7.06120827912 47% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359170160597 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.121073544097 0.084324248473 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.100645482319 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174182391934 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.110449252711 0.056905535591 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 50.2224549098 142% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.51 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.54 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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