Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles. Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Use of leisure time is depends on people to people. Some people like to do certain activities to stretch their mind, other people like to rest the mind during leisure time which helps them to think clearly. In this essay we discuss both given views.
People who do mind stretching activities during their leisure time are the one you constantly improve their selfs, learn something new and irrelevant to their field which help them to think different then other people. They like to do book reading, playing games like word puzzles, go and chess. Games which have strategies, and understanding the way how opponent think. For instance, by playing chess in leisure time, its improve your ability to think long-term conditions and how to solve problem efficiently. Also, by reading factual books you can understand way people think and what people want from you, things like this make huge impact in real world.
The second type of people, who like to rest their mind in leisure time. These are ones who likes to enjoy spending times with their family and friends. In addition, some people also enjoying doing nothing in their free time, they just wants break from their daily routine. For example, people like to binge watch season over the weekends with their friends, like to go out to watch movie or playing video games at home. This all activities help to improve their quality of work at office.
In conclusion, Taking break from hectic schedule and make time for your own self, it's really necessary to live better life. Also, you can achieve your goals by investing your leisure time properly. Activities which we do in our free time also depends on age, kids likes to play, youngsters likes to hangout with friends or learn something new, older people likes to spending time by read books.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'different 'from''? 'Different than' is often considered colloquial style.
Suggestion: from
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, really, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 13.1623246493 23% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1497.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 308.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86038961039 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18926351222 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.20770387524 2.80592935109 79% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535714285714 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 442.8 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5661308956 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.5625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.25 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.5625 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.366710954407 0.244688304435 150% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138579270117 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980232433624 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.274709936844 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108909295499 0.056905535591 191% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.24 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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