People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Drug addiction have been a problem since last four hundred years, but since 1970 due to advancement in science more different kind of drugs are developed. Mainly wrong mentality of youth now days drag them in to drug addiction. They never know kind of damage drug cause to our body. Even if, they know youth like to do this type of addiction for fun.
There are two types of drug available in market legal and illegal drugs. Legal drug like cough syrup, pain-killer tablets, cigars, alcohol and illegal drugs like weed, cocaine and different types of pills. Youth learn a lot from the environment they live in. For instance, if parent have drug addiction, then secretly their children willing to use drugs too. In modern-day society people think that they feel stress relief with drugs, but there are many ways to reduce stress. By doing activities like sport, regular running in the morning, yoga and meditation we can control any stress in our life. Now a days, people celebrate their life achievement by throwing party and they believe that without alcohol their party stay incomplete. Also, people start doing drugs and drinking alcohol on every festival celebration.
We can protect young people from drugs addiction. We must spared knowledge in every school and college that what’s their life look like if they took drugs. Not only that, this type of message needs to be reach in every society and company. We have to show them example from past that many celebrity and business man life gets destroyed after getting drug addiction. In addition, parents have to encourage their children for joining community services at their young age.
To concluded, parents have to keep eye on their children and government have to develop such acts that supplier and manufacturer of drug get caught as soon as possible. We must encourage youngsters to use their energy to make world a better place.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'learns'.
Suggestion: learns
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Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun celebrity seems to be countable; consider using: 'many celebrities'.
Suggestion: many celebrities
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, look, so, then, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1589.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.965625 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38422345521 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58125 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.1202858402 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.6315789474 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8421052632 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.42105263158 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.110966449946 0.244688304435 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399471712499 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.043047067986 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0643656006326 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0440168570225 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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