People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Drugs are basically uses by people to relieve from a pain caused by disease which are legal and the illegal drugs which people tend to do is for more fun and it is kind of a addiction which currently observed by the present youth.However there is both drugs used by them but most of it is illegal one.
Firstly,This is one of the thing which is experienced by most of the youth in all over the world irrespective of their age and there is no one who really thinks to reduce the consumption of it.Although parents and family members of society are one of the reasons why the youth is trying to take the drugs.For example,a child sees his father taking drugs everyday infront of him and one day he actually finds one at home where he got a feeling to try which he did and right after that everyday he started stealing money and buying outside.Even there are people on roads who use the drugs infront of children and influence the child to try it.Although there are drugs in most of the medicines for example,to treat cardio-vascular problems often the patient is given drugs to overcome his pain and even in a hospital when a patient is amputated he is often treated however these are legal once authorized by the issue of government which also has some effect to the body in the future.
Apart from the influence of both legal and illegal usage of drugs today, several methods should be considered. First, parents should discipline children to distinguish illegal and legal drugs so that they would not be confused when encountering them. Second, teachers should provide helpful information to students about the effects of drugs to develop a better awareness of them. Eventually, governments need to get involved in banning illegal drugs, which prevents local citizens from using them in the first place. Consequently, they not only become less dependent on drugs but also develop a healthier lifestyle.
In conclusion,would suggest that parents can give freedom but also need to restrict and keep an eye on their child if they are doing any such wrong things and make them aware of the consequences caused if they are influenced by such drugs and teach them that life can be enjoyed in different ways rather than addicted to things which effect their health as well as life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, consequently, first, firstly, however, if, really, second, so, well, apart from, for example, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 58.0 41.998997996 138% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1891.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 397.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76322418136 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46372701284 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63338049202 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518891687657 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 49.0 20.2975951904 241% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 279.890352415 49.4020404114 567% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 236.375 106.682146367 222% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 49.625 20.7667163134 239% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 21.125 7.06120827912 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159904275465 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0657111219528 0.084324248473 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490718956822 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0918811833569 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0421953237407 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.8 13.0946893788 197% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.2 50.2224549098 60% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.2 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.22 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 21.6 10.1190380762 213% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 22.0 10.7795591182 204% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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