People in all modern societies use drugs, but today's youth are experimenting with both legal and illegal drugs, and at an increasingly early age. Some sociologists claim that parents and other members of society often set a bad example.
Discuss the causes and some effects of widespread drug use by young people in modern day society. Make any recommendations you feel are necessary to help fight youth drug abuse.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Drugs are basically uses by people to relieve from a pain caused by disease which are legal and the illegal drugs which people tend to do is for more fun and it is kind of addiction which now observed by the present youth.However there is both drugs used by them but most of it is illegal one.
Firstly,This is one of the thing which is experienced by most of the youth in all over the world irrespective of their age and there is no one who really thinks to reduce the consumption of it.Although parents and family members of society are one of the reasons why the youth is trying to take the drugs.For example,a child sees his father taking drugs everyday in front of him and one day he actually finds one at home where he got a feeling to try which he did and right after that everyday he started stealing money and buying outside.Even there are people on roads who use the drugs in front of children and influence the child to try it.Although there are drugs in most of the medicines such as,to treat cardio-vascular problems often the patient is given drugs to overcome his pain and even in a hospital when a patient is amputated he is often treated however these are legal once authorized by the issue of government which also has some effect to the body in the future.
Secondly,the effects by the usage of drugs for the young people are many such as they lack in terms of education,they don't bother about the career and parents are also one of the reason who barely cares about the child they don't really give importance to them probably made them do such things without any fear.The pocket money which the young people is given for good purpose is ruining their life with the usage of drugs.The only solution is that parents realize the importance of the life of their child and it is never late to stop them doing and send them to a rehabilitation centre.The government should also take initiative by providing awareness about the youth drugs abuse and most of the colleges and universities has to look after their students who are trying to use it.Even if they are caught necessary action has to be taken so that other won't follow the same for example,there was a friend of mine who was very brilliant and his friends made him use the drugs to try for once but he instead regularly used and became so addictive that he has sent to rehabilitation centre his entire career is spoiled and parents with broken heart blames that it is their mistake to give the freedom.
In conclusion,would suggest that parents can give freedom but also need to restrict and keep an eye on their child if they are doing any such wrong things and make them aware of the consequences caused if they are influenced by such drugs and teach them that life can be enjoyed in different ways and not addicted to things which effect their health as well as life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, well, as to, for example, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 33.0 13.1623246493 251% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 24.0 10.4138276553 230% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 22.0 7.30460921844 301% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 50.0 24.0651302605 208% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2342.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 517.0 315.596192385 164% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.52998065764 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76839952204 4.20363070211 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49922150781 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.450676982592 0.561755894193 80% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 741.6 506.74238477 146% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 129.0 20.2975951904 636% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 388.351242434 49.4020404114 786% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 585.5 106.682146367 549% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 129.25 20.7667163134 622% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 38.75 7.06120827912 549% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141445549247 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0870019822048 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.040552905141 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0870019822048 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.040552905141 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 64.5 13.0946893788 493% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -42.54 50.2224549098 -85% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 15.9 7.44779559118 213% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 51.2 11.3001002004 453% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.18 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 12.45 8.58950901804 145% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.5 9.78957915832 281% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 53.6 10.1190380762 530% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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