Children from 7-11 now spend more time watching television and playing video games than before. What are the effects of this on children, families and society? What are the possible solutions to this problem?
Children at young age in the present spend more time on watching television or they play video games.In the past it was only playing cricket or some outdoor games.As the technology increases and the children are more attracted by video games or some animated shows to watch on television.
on one hand,It is often seen that there are many affects to children as it is the young age where they gain more knowledge,develop good communication skills but rather they become couch potato and effect eyesight also become so addicted that they don't care even there is a fire in the house.The family who has so much dreams on their child once they are big and earn more money but they instead waste most of the time doing such useless things.This effects the entire society like such as the kids at present generations are future leaders if don't focus on studies then the economy could go down and in future they would face difficulties if they don't nurture right from childhood.
On the other hand,though there are no permanent solutions for stopping children from watching however parents can take initiative by limiting such activities for a shorter time.Spend more time children play with them distract them from playing video games.Let them watch t. v. and gain more information on watching global news or discovery channel and not movies or serials etc.Allowing them to go and play outdoor games basically parents need to keep the child busy with many other activities which can develop their mental ability and skills.For example a child at the age of 10 can also do coding and his I.Q level is the highest level for his age.To bring up more such children we need to take every step carefully help them in developing more skills and learn new creative ideas than wasting the time on useless video games.
In the conclusion,I would say that parents need to concentrate more on their kids and make them learn knowledge right from young age and probably not having any television or video games at home instead have more books and games which increases their memory power to help them do better with improving knowledge.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, then, for example, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1759.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 364.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83241758242 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47322944858 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.53021978022 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 72.0 20.2975951904 355% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 164.887355489 49.4020404114 334% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 351.8 106.682146367 330% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 72.8 20.7667163134 351% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 14.6 7.06120827912 207% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 20.0 5.01903807615 398% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250528118409 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160466781953 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0776346865106 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162066702764 0.151304729494 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0755615898205 0.056905535591 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 37.7 13.0946893788 288% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 6.86 50.2224549098 14% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 30.2 11.3001002004 267% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.92 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.46 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 30.8 10.1190380762 304% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 31.0 10.7795591182 288% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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