Learning about the past has no value for those of us living in the present.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
World gets change day by day but human psychology remains same, in that manner we can say thousand words from someone's history.I am totally agree with the given statement.
We can learn many things from over ancestors. How they used to live?, what they drink?, what they do for living? all this questions only gets solved if we know the past. We can differentiate life we used to live and life we currently live. By studying which kind of challenges we faced in past, we can eliminate in future or find solution for it. For example, if we know which kinds of trouble we have to face in tsunami, then we alert people who lives near the coastal area and instruct them to do certain things from begin affected by tsunami. In all this situation past help us a lot.
Economy is one of thing which helps to run this world since human exist. We can predict the future of country from certain events. Finds the patterns and similarities in past to eliminate economic crisis. In 2008, United State of America had to suffer from bad economy, to protect they introduce new committee and established new laws. We can understand relation between to counties from past, how much they involve in war, which commodity they trade in past. All this things also helps to develop market strategy for company for achieve goals.
In the end, to create better future and make world peace we have to study past and understand well. This way past play an important role in everyone's life.
- There is growing evidence that man-made activities are making global temperatures higher.What might be the man-made causes of temperatures rising? How should we deal with this problem? 78
- Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 73
- Many museums and historical sites are mainly visited by tourists but not local people. Why is this the case and what can be done to attract more local people to visit these places? 73
- An increasing number of people are buying what they need on line.What are the advantages and disadvantages for both individuals and companies. 73
- Rich countries should allow jobs for skilled and knowledgeable employees who are from poor countries. Do you agree or disagree? 73
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 91, Rule ID: NODT_DOZEN[1]
Message: Use simply: 'a thousand'.
Suggestion: a thousand
...remains same, in that manner we can say thousand words from someones history.I am totall...
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Line 1, column 128, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...ay thousand words from someones history.I am totally agree with the given stateme...
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Line 1, column 141, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...ords from someones history.I am totally agree with the given statement. We can lea...
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Line 3, column 114, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: All
...t they drink?, what they do for living? all this questions only gets solved if we k...
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Line 3, column 287, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...dying which kind of challenges we faced in past, we can eliminate in future or find sol...
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Line 3, column 520, Rule ID: BEING_BEGIN[2]
Message: Did you mean 'being'?
Suggestion: being
...instruct them to do certain things from begin affected by tsunami. In all this situat...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the past'?
Suggestion: in the past
...olve in war, which commodity they trade in past. All this things also helps to develop ...
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Line 5, column 465, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...which commodity they trade in past. All this things also helps to develop market str...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, for example, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 1.0 13.1623246493 8% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1212.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.64367816092 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.3050491145 2.80592935109 82% => OK
Unique words: 156.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.597701149425 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.8829675814 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 75.75 106.682146367 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.3125 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.1875 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139882867555 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0526486499747 0.084324248473 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0444122170479 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0741238090385 0.151304729494 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492786857853 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.34 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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