Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
On planet we living have three types of countries developed, under development, under developed.Mostly under developed counties have financial issus, with the help of orgenizations like UNICEF, developed countries give money to provide basic needs and education to their locals.I am strongly disagree with doneting money.
Recently we heard news related to curruption and scams in developing and under developed countries.Due to this fact many poor countries are not able to beat financial issues.Every year budget gets annouced in every country in which there are some money alloted to help poor countries. With the refreance of privious argument, money often handover to goverment of poor contries and authories person who have power to use that money can't use efficiently. Sometimes they spend for their on facilitys. For example, currntly pakistan government have financial issus, infact pakistan govenment don't have money to pay salary to government officers. And in this whole situation prime ministor are rome around country in their helicopter. One trip cost around 3 lakhs. This way even if developed countries help with money but situation remains as it is.
On the other way, if developed countries start providing help for locals basis needs like proper accommodation, clean water, provides medicin and education etc. Already rich countries give money to poor countries, in addition they starts to provides facility to setup hospitals, schools and colleges, helps to build power plant and infrastucers this become most efficient way to overcome poverty. For example, Chinese government helps pakistan to help nuclear power plant in their country. That plant will provied elecricity to whole nation.
In the end, if developed countries provide other types of help to poor countries that will be most efficient way to overcomes poverty rather than give money.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, for example, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1591.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.48620689655 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75266814678 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.558620689655 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 88.3903392402 49.4020404114 179% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.384615385 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3076923077 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.84615384615 7.06120827912 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.351152136539 0.244688304435 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.120062685577 0.084324248473 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110781755733 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.252805792956 0.151304729494 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.076163856425 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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