In the 21st century, experience is being prized by employers more than degrees. A person without a degree and 5 years experience is more likely to get a job over someone with two master's degrees and no experience. Is it justifiable, since university education is very expensive?
Due to quality improvement in education from the ground up, market for employees to get job become more competitive. Most of the multinational companies around globe started changing their job policies. They more like to hire skilled and experienced person, who have 5 years of professional experience without degree. With compare to the applicant who have two master's degree and zero work experience. This essay discusses why in 21st century employer started admiring experience over education.
First of all, In any industry you choose, they need worker and employees that can solve their problems, increase their production and profit margin over product and services. In a past, due to lack of information, companies could not reached to skilled person. So, they only hired employees who have good education and completed their tertiary education from well-know institute. But scenario got completely changed since evolution of the internet, person can learn about anything and get hands on experience at their home. There is no need to go to college for getting specializes in one field. Now employees who are seeking to get new job reach out to any company they want and set their interview by just qualifying their requirements.
From another point of view, there are companies out their who thinks that person who have 5 years of experience can not defeated by person who just completed his master's without any professional experience. Because one can get more knowledge about industry by practicing on hands compare to just getting theoretical based knowledge in classes.
Overall, in new era of skillful people, it's acceptable that person with experience gets the job. In addition, getting only theoretical based education in expensive college without developing any skills are worthless.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: The verb 'could' requires the base form of the verb: 'reach'
Suggestion: reach
...ack of information, companies could not reached to skilled person. So, they only hired ...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'defeat'
Suggestion: defeat
... who have 5 years of experience can not defeated by person who just completed his master...
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Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...rs without any professional experience. Because one can get more knowledge about indust...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, so, well, in addition, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1529.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3649122807 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80228548504 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.561403508772 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 468.9 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.7201468207 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.933333333 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.4 7.06120827912 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254705623414 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.090737809217 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0655860269617 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175044787395 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.087535639157 0.056905535591 154% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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