Thanks to the modern amenities provided by large residential apartments many people prefer them to detached houses. In my opinion, the benefits of living in apartment blocks outweigh its drawbacks.
According to recent survey living standard in apartment are increased dramatically. Now a days, every young men/women have dream to live in city and apartments are fulfill that in very efficient way. The main advantage of living in apartments is security. Apartments are more secure compare to cottage houses. There are many security cameras monitored by person 24x7. It's hard for burglars to break an apartment in middle of a day without anyone to notice. Also, police squad are much higher compare to rural areas. Schools, colleges, banks, supermarkets are mostly located in every square kilometer of cities. Transportation is much more efficient in cities that way time and money both get saved that's other most important benefit of living in apartments.
Apartments are separated by thin walls so you might have to compromise your privacy. Sometimes you can heard loud music and talks from next apartment. Maintenance of apartments are low but you have to pay for prime parking and stuffs.
Over all, in my point of view advantages of living in apartments are much higher compared to many other types of accommodation.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 70, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ving standard in apartment are increased dramatically. Now a days, every young me...
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Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
... apartment are increased dramatically. Now a days, every young men/women have dream to li...
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Line 3, column 90, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...rtment are increased dramatically. Now a days, every young men/women have dream to li...
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Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'dreamed', 'dreamt'.
Suggestion: dreamed; dreamt
... Now a days, every young men/women have dream to live in city and apartments are fulf...
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Line 3, column 166, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'fulfilled'.
Suggestion: fulfilled
...ream to live in city and apartments are fulfill that in very efficient way. The main ad...
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Line 3, column 700, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: that's
... that way time and money both get saved thats other most important benefit of living ...
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Line 5, column 104, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'hear'
Suggestion: hear
...promise your privacy. Sometimes you can heard loud music and talks from next apartmen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1117.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 214.0 315.596192385 68% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21962616822 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.82475343497 4.20363070211 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78453313335 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.640186915888 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 27.2934668617 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.4666666667 106.682146367 70% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2666666667 20.7667163134 69% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.86666666667 7.06120827912 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0364894131676 0.244688304435 15% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0124428793305 0.084324248473 15% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0134303054809 0.0667982634062 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.025806356137 0.151304729494 17% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0111713848171 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.4 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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