You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Write about the following topic.
Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people might agree with this statement and other people might disagree with this view. I strongly believe this statement and these are my reasons in the following paragraphs.
First of all, it has relative with base of poor countries. We should to understand why these poor countries are poor? Most of poor countries are government are corrupt and inefficient. It means if developed countries only give money and it will did not have a good results, because the money was embezzled by their government. I have a story saying from my best friend. She says that she has a friend is very poor and always borrow money from his friend. This boy explained that is his mother is was ill. As his classmates and friends, people always give he some financial aid for his mother until some classmates decided to visit his mother. These classmates felt shocks for that his mother still sick and doctor says he never paid for money. They ask for this boy why he cheat to them, finally they know the fact, nobody this boy often takes drugs. These money all wasted for drugs. This is a terrible thing. With the similar reason, these money never arrived to the hands of common poor people. Even if these poor countries does not how to arrange these money.
Secondly, I think developed countries should give other types of help. Such as they can make some people help them to build teaching building. Let some teacher to teach students from poor countries some knowledge. They can teach them how to solve problem of farming, how to solve their starving.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'do'
Suggestion: do
...d countries only give money and it will did not have a good results, because the mo...
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Line 3, column 494, Rule ID: VBZ_VBD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'it'?
Suggestion: it
.... This boy explained that is his mother is was ill. As his classmates and friends,...
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Line 3, column 497, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
...his boy explained that is his mother is was ill. As his classmates and friends, peo...
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Line 3, column 774, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'he' must be used with a third-person verb: 'cheats'.
Suggestion: cheats
...for money. They ask for this boy why he cheat to them, finally they know the fact, no...
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Line 3, column 852, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'These moneys', 'These monies'?
Suggestion: This money; These moneys; These monies
...act, nobody this boy often takes drugs. These money all wasted for drugs. This is a terribl...
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Line 3, column 937, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
...errible thing. With the similar reason, these money never arrived to the hands of common po...
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Line 3, column 999, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[2]
Message: “Even if” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ved to the hands of common poor people. Even if these poor countries does not how to ar...
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Line 3, column 1052, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this money' or 'these moneys', 'these monies'?
Suggestion: this money; these moneys; these monies
... poor countries does not how to arrange these money. Secondly, I think developed countri...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, if, second, secondly, so, still, i think, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 46.0 24.0651302605 191% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70479704797 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.26371057364 2.80592935109 81% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.531365313653 0.561755894193 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 5.43587174349 258% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.375159574 49.4020404114 59% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 63.75 106.682146367 60% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.55 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.95 7.06120827912 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.248599967282 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0855171651837 0.084324248473 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0919861683087 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15489243677 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614414219929 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 13.0946893788 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 50.2224549098 150% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 11.3001002004 53% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 9.39 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.38 8.58950901804 74% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 78.4519038076 46% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 10.7795591182 56% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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