All problems are illutions of mind. We can control any problem of our lives with the help of our minds and we can also mess up any simple solution if we cannot dominate it. There are two schools of thought where one opines that we can build a strong mind when we utilize our free time wisely through reading and playing puzzling games and other group feels that there are some other way around. However, I tend to agree with the notion that we should develop our mind during our relax time. In this essay I will highlight my point of views and provide sound reasoning for my claims.
There are multifarious benefits if we train our minds when we are in the relaxing mode. First and formost, it helps to broadens our horizons. To be precise, reading is the only time when we can relax and learn at the same time and we can diminish some language barriers if we do so. For instance, noeadays we all are struggling with work-life balance and we can not read a lot during our working hours. Despite opf this, we can read a lot while we are having the bedtime. Secondly, in our leisure time we do not bother about our surroundings. In other words, throught our busy schedule, we are occupied with others opinions and our important responsibilities. Hence, we can do whatever we want to do in this free time and build a strong mind with the help of some activities such as doing word puzzles. These activities not only helpful to our minds but also for our brains. Finally, it helps us to sustain in the highly competitive world. If we do not upgrade ourselvs, it will be difficult to bring out the best form us. I would like to cite an example. I am an IT professional and I have to endure more than 10 hours work pressure during my working hours. So I read lots of e-books during my leisure time because it boosts my knowledge which I can impliment during my work. Therefore, we should learn to train our minds during our me time.
Conversely, some people argue against this notion because of some vital reasons. Firstly, if we constantly push our minds specially during our relax time, we may face some serious health hassles. In other words, as we are having a lot of mental or physical pressure every now and then, we should spend our leisue time in order to take a proper rest. If we do not follow this, we may face some ubiquitous probles such as high blood pressure in the coming future. Additionally, rest help us to heel. To be precise, if we rest well, we can fight well. For example, according to a resarch paper published in Toronto University, desprite of high IQ level, more Canadian people are suffering from many health ailments due to lack of proper sleep. Hence, rest is important to lead a healthy lifestyle.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate my opinion by saying that, although we cannot avoid rampant health issues for lack of rest, our mind and brain can be developed if we know how to train them during our leisure time to be updated. However, we must do it under doctor's supervisions.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 120, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'broaden'.
Suggestion: broaden
...ng mode. First and formost, it helps to broadens our horizons. To be precise, reading is...
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Line 3, column 1062, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'an' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: an; IT
.... I would like to cite an example. I am an IT professional and I have to endure more ...
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Line 5, column 267, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...ng a lot of mental or physical pressure every now and then, we should spend our leisue time in ord...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 23.0 7.85571142285 293% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 90.0 24.0651302605 374% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 68.0 41.998997996 162% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2469.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 550.0 315.596192385 174% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.48909090909 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.84273464058 4.20363070211 115% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44016054207 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 268.0 176.041082164 152% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.487272727273 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 771.3 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 19.0 5.43587174349 350% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 16.0721442886 187% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.0990432613 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.3 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.3333333333 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.83333333333 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 19.0 8.67935871743 219% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218901690754 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0722863653586 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527132497659 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154794643562 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311875085768 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.9 13.0946893788 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.76 12.4159519038 71% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.4 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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