Mind is a helpful servant but a dangerous master. We can control every situation with the help of our minds. There are some schools of thought where one group believes that we should involve ourselves in some activities such as playing puzzle games or reading during our spare time in order to develop our mind when another group feels that we should be inactive to recharge our minds. However, I tend to agree with the notion that we must train our mind now and then. In this essay, I will highlight my view points and try to provide sound resoning for my claims.
There are multifarious benefits when we train our minds during our leisure time. First and foremost, it acts like a stress buster. To be precise, as we all are dealing with work-life balance, stress can slip away when we involve our minds in order to read or play games. Active reading can help individual to reduce some stress of daily life. In addition, it helps to protect our brains from losing creative powers. In other words, if we play puzzle games, our brains remain active and creative. So, we can defect them from being inactive. Finally, instead of being inactive, we can boost our knowledgde when we utilize our free time to learn something new. Furthermore, in order to sustain in this competitive world, we should train our minds by playing word puzzles and reading to achieve the success. For instance, as a professional, I do not get enough time during my working hours in order to gain knowledge in different aspects and for that I use my spare time for reading new technological skills to be updated according to the current market.
Conversely, some argue that we should rest our minds if we get some leisure time. Firstly, we can recharge ourselves when we take rest. Additionally, our brains as well as mind become more aware when we take proper rest. In other words, despite of daily inevitable responsibilities, we can cope up with the pace of life if we take a good rest and it can fresh our minds. Finally, rest can mitigate health hassles. According to an article published in U.S Times, 30% people are suffering from some rampant health ailments due to lack of sleep. Thus, we should take care of our minds instead of pushing it now and then.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate my opinion by saying that, although laziness can heel our minds, active mind can be useful to stay creative and aware all the time.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: S
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, then, thus, well, for instance, in addition, such as, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 19.0 7.85571142285 242% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 63.0 24.0651302605 262% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 56.0 41.998997996 133% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1989.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 428.0 315.596192385 136% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64719626168 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45088335076 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 213.0 176.041082164 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.497663551402 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 611.1 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 5.43587174349 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.3668683151 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4782608696 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6086956522 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.60869565217 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201182394738 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702116517014 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063119884603 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139402893223 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229845814201 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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