Some people think that it is important to use leisure time for activities that improve the mind, such as reading and doing word puzzles.
Other people feel that it is important to rest the mind during leisure time.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In recent times, there has been a stance indicating that utilize spare time for brain-stimulating activities is of paramount importance. However, several people still stand by the idea that relaxing during respite time is more crucial. In this essay, both views will be further elucidated and opinions will be given.
On the one hand, leisure time is thought to be when people bolster their subconscious thinking with activities that can stimulate cognitive thinking or provide helpful lessons. They can benefit one’s brain while may still be relaxing and worth spending time on. One prominent justification for this is reading. This activity may provide people with a reservoir of knowledge and can help people vicariously go through what authors have gone through and therefore, accumulate worth-knowing information from a myriad of topics like finance or self-growth. On this account, spending less time taking a nap and utilizing more time to read through books such as “Rich Dad, Poor Dad” or “The Alchemist” is more beneficial. Doing word puzzles is also worth exchanging spare time for since it is one of the actions that play pivotal roles in improving one’s thinking ability and problem-solving skills. People might feel a sense of exuberance when they can solve a question and still strengthen and sharpen their subconscious and logical thinking simultaneously.
On the other hand, a respite during leisure time is also partly favored as it can help people regain energy and get them going for the rest of the day. In other words, for many people, not taking a nap can have a negative impact on their stamina, which in turn makes them feel unmotivated or might start to procrastinate since they lack the energy needed. These can lead to several disadvantages like the inability to stay focus or sleep deprivation. In this way, it is of the high possibility that people would be more benefited from taking a nap.
Although during spare time, having a rest may be as important as it is for strengthening the brain, I personally have a keen on the latter as I believe reading and solving puzzles are more beneficial.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, may, so, still, then, therefore, while, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1794.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0821529745 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87332294047 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538243626062 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.3369165463 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.6 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.73333333333 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288498677378 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0938108260972 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586504091648 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172829747497 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0246886608515 0.056905535591 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.49 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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