Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
art plays an indispensable role in shaping and expressing the cultural aspects of any nation. If no one pursued arts, we wouldn’t have exquisite artifacts, sculptures, ornaments, and architectural monuments to boast of. it also helps us understand our ancestors, roots, and evolutionary patterns through previous civilizations.
art has a profound effect on our creativity. art as a field of work stimulates ingenuity and inventiveness. many famous artistic discoveries in literature, music, songs and dance forms exemplify the success of art disciplines. The well-known painting of Mona Lisa by Leonardo da Vinci, resplendent facade and breath-taking design of Taj Mahal by Shajahan and, Eiffel tower in Paris are just a few illustrations. Likewise, many forms of music such as classical, jazz and rock performances have emerged through arts.
Furthermore, art gives a platform for students to explore the hidden potentials and offers them better career alternatives. Even people from less privileged backgrounds can change their life by showcasing their artistic prowess. For example, last year the winner of India’s got talent hailed from a humble background. This contestant not only earned huge prize money but also got opportunities in upcoming films.
Lastly, I feel it is less likely that all students will be interested in pursuing mainstream subjects. In order to have a balanced society, it is imperative that considerable proportion of students study art subjects. we need as many artists, painters, musicians, historians and media professionals as we need doctors, engineers and scientists.
In summary, I believe that art greatly influences our cultural and historical knowledge in a positive way. artistic achievements benefit individuals and society at large. New talents are unearthed. Therefore, I feel that children should be encouraged to take art subjects; however, they should be given a choice. Preferring art subjects over others should not be the norm.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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...stimulates ingenuity and inventiveness. many famous artistic discoveries in literatu...
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...gn of Taj Mahal by Shajahan and, Eiffel tower in Paris are just a few illustrations. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, lastly, likewise, so, therefore, well, for example, i feel, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1692.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.60264900662 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22282575555 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 210.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.695364238411 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.9247697118 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.1 20.7667163134 73% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.8 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0557361218298 0.244688304435 23% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0139756738683 0.084324248473 17% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0177075660033 0.0667982634062 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0271361235769 0.151304729494 18% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0115465062906 0.056905535591 20% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.61 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.13 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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