Some people think that it is more beneficial to take part in sports which are played in teams, like football, while other people think that taking part in individual sports, like tennis or swimming, is better. Discuss both views and give your own opinion
People’s opinions differ on whether it is more beneficial to participate in team sports or individual sports. Although it is true that solo sports bring a number of advantages, I believe that playing sports in teams usually is a better choice.
On the one hand, one-person sports enable people to improve concentration and independence abilities. Firstly, as there is only one player in the games, people could avoid unwanted distraction from others, which prevents them from focusing on the games. For example, in team sports, sometimes, tension and disagreements among team members are likely to provoke heated argument. This irruption then distracts people’s attention from the games and wastes time of the players, who do not wish to be involved in this trouble. Furthermore, solo sports is an individual competition that requires complete independence. Without help, making decisions by themselves or overcomming difficulties on their own are essential skills for players to win the games.
On the other hand, it appears to me that team sports offer more benefits from social relationship and life lessons. Firstly, joining in a team sports is such a great opportunity to broaden social relationship because people can meet new friends and develop spirit of friendship. This bond of friendship could be strengthened by sharing same interests and interacting with each other while playing. Besides, when playing sports in teams, both failure and success will teach people valuable lessons such as teamwork and sacrifice. No matter how talented the player is, he must rely on his teammates and reach the same goals. Team members must work together and put themselves in other’s shoes, unless, they will miss their targets. For instance, in a football match, goal keeper, defenders or attackers in a team need to communicate and cooperate effectively, They have different assignment but share the same responsibilities for the success of the team.
In conclusion, while both types of sports have distinct benefits, I prefer playing sports in teams because of the above reasons.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, so, then, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1783.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.40303030303 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96340706803 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609090909091 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 520.2 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.9546038579 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.4375 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.625 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188793316479 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.06508585439 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546607320526 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.129617071713 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0408770600165 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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