Some people think that it is a waste of money for countries to host big sporting events like the world cup, and that the money would be better spent on other things. However, others think that hosting large sporting events has a clear, positive impact on a country.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Give reason for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
On special sporting occasions, that nations voluntarily hold accountable for organizing related events has become a publicly recognized phenomenon. While some people are convinced that expenditure should be cut to prioritize other significant aspects, I would argue that hosting sporting festivals will bring both advertising and commercial benefits to countries.
On the one hand, placing too much emphasis on sports can lead to a waste of money. There is no denying that, compared to sporting events, education, healthcare services and transportation are higher on agenda. Therefore allocating resources to construct stadiums, renovate infrastructure and update sports facilities are an unnecessary investment, especially when these improvements are only used on specific sporting occasions. In addition, enhancing sports facilities to fulfil the needs of sports teams can result in curbing public spending on other fields which are worth prioritizing expenditure on. Therefore, national authorities should be careful when making decision to host sporting events as they could have adverse effects on citizens who are in higher need of government subsidies.
On the other hand, becoming host nations on sports occasions certainly opens new opportunities in both advertising and commercial ways. In terms of advertising impact, hosting worldwide events definitely gives nations chances to become the centre of attention on social appliances, newspapers and other media which are good means of promoting their public images. Additionally, organizing sporting events definitely do wonders for host nations’ finance. For example, World Cup 2018 held in Russia has been proven to generate huge profits in terms of accommodations and customer services. These activities are surely boosters for national economy and a source of foreign money.
In conclusion, although there are some drawbacks to host countries in worldwide sporting events, it seems to me that those countries can gain more benefits with regard to economy and public images.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1752.0 1615.20841683 108% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82059800664 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02516459768 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617940199336 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 543.6 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1400606647 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.769230769 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1538461538 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.69230769231 7.06120827912 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.338414038584 0.244688304435 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.114933182724 0.084324248473 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0415668371915 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19742761934 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0427071549394 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.21 50.2224549098 62% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.77 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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